Friday, January 05, 2018

Draft



  1.  That's done.
  2. No, something's missing.
  3. Good, got it covered.
  4. Where did that word come from?
  5. I really like that line.
  6. Well, I sorta like that line.
  7. That line has to go.
  8. I can find something better.
  9. It shouldn't take lone.
  10. I meant "long."
  11. All right, but now the other section just doesn't have punch.
  12. Do they need to have punch?
  13. Good. Much better.
  14. Time for a break. Clear the mind.
  15. Okay. Back to work.
  16. Who wrote this trash?

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