- That's done.
- No, something's missing.
- Good, got it covered.
- Where did that word come from?
- I really like that line.
- Well, I sorta like that line.
- That line has to go.
- I can find something better.
- It shouldn't take lone.
- I meant "long."
- All right, but now the other section just doesn't have punch.
- Do they need to have punch?
- Good. Much better.
- Time for a break. Clear the mind.
- Okay. Back to work.
- Who wrote this trash?
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