Saturday, February 05, 2011

Thoughts on a Draft Post

  • Close, but not quite ready.

  • I'm not sure if I agree with that.

  • How does this differ from previous posts on the subject?

  • Is that fair?

  • That's too clever.

  • I really like that section but it adds nothing to the piece.

  • I find it interesting. Will anyone else?

  • There's been too much written on that subject.

  • Will anyone realize that was meant to be humorous?

  • Be sure to give a "Hat Tip."

  • Get rid of the "thats."

  • And the "ands."

  • Shorten the sentence.

  • You're covering too many topics.

  • Check that spelling.

  • Don't rush it.

  • Make it clearer.

  • Sleep on that one.

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