Thoughts on a Draft Post

• Close, but not quite ready.


• I'm not sure if I agree with that.


• How does this differ from previous posts on the subject?


• Is that fair?


• That's too clever.


• I really like that section but it adds nothing to the piece.


• I find it interesting. Will anyone else?


• There's been too much written on that subject.


• Will anyone realize that was meant to be humorous?


• Be sure to give a "Hat Tip."


• Get rid of the "thats."


• And the "ands."


• Shorten the sentence.


• You're covering too many topics.


• Check that spelling.


• Don't rush it.


• Make it clearer.


• Sleep on that one.